I just finished reading all of your blog posts and I have to say that I am very impressed with all of your first attempts at blogging. I am proud of all of you! Your blogs were graphically appealing and for the most part were quite well written. I enjoyed reading all of them.
Some pointers for future posts:
- Inject more of your personal voice into your writing: Your readers want to hear you, not robotic facts and figures
- Write less of a summary: Try not to think of your blog as a book report. Think about your personal connections to the text and talk about that (text-to-self; text-to-text; text-to-world)
Overall, you all did a great job and should really be very proud of yourselves. Continue to look at your classmates' blogs as well. Learn from each other.
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